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Yeah.

I don't agree on the dynamics. but it's really good mate!

Helth responds:

Haha kk ty^^

Dude

That's about the sickest thing i have heard so far. (:

broove responds:

awsome!

Still!

Erg leuk! Kettel anyone? ; )

MortalMaxx responds:

Thanks. Ik hoor dat vaker, ook al luister ik nooit naar Kettel.

Well...

This is just RANDOM glitching and melodies. Each 10 seconds suggests it's like a different song. I wouldn't be surprised if you bashed your head on your keyboard while making this melody.

How the f is this getting in the weekly best?

Try to get some melodic and song structure.

InvisibleObserver responds:

"Prominent Genre: Ambient, Mixed with Breakcore / IDM / Glitchcore"

I'm a bit surprised you didn't feel a bit more at home with this.

As for how it got weekly, my guess is its week ending score of 4.24 was simply higher then the other submissions eligible to be top 5 weekly.

No head bashing or random melodies occured here.

Hmm!

Constructive criticism:

Make your own songs.

Use less loops, try to expand your music knowledge by trying to make sounds and patterns yourself.

Try to use a DAW that allows more than just real recording and loop pasting if you want to be an 'artist'

I could give you hints on the mastering because the piano sounds awfully sharp on headphones and stuff.

But since you didn't even make this yourself, i highly doubt -

no

I knów you haven't mastered / equalized this for a single bit.

Good day sir. It's a shame this ever got to newgrounds in the first place.

Hacsev responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism :) :(

Just a question. How did your review get deleted?

Hey mister hiphop.

Nc321, #1 NG hiphop artist, KO! hehe ; )

I really like the chord progression and especially the solo in this song. The sounds really fit together as well (:

Good job!

DatBoiNC responds:

Thanks buddy

Amazing.

Fav'd you and this song.
5/5 10/10

In other words.

Freaking epic. Love the sound quality and chord progression.

Mid-Night responds:

<3 =)

Yep!

This sounds well sexy (:

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks!

Okay.

Giving you a lower score will get my review deleted anyways, so let's keep it neutral. Guess there's no room for commentary on NG.

Okay listen up man...

Hints:

Dynamics:

A breakdown maybe? something to keep it interesting? It's like boom boom in your face all the time and that doesn't work.

Samples:

The kick drowns in the mix, which makes the song itself less powerful.

The clap is a little too robotic for this genre / my style.

The originality:

Oh yay, yet another tetris remix. Said enough.

The instrumentation:

This is actually pretty good. I could be a bitch and whine about how this is not my genre, but it's okay.

The lead although might be a little too bit WHAAARGH POWAH!
Saying this while i think this saps away a lot of the kick-power.

VEC standard loops / fills.

I heard a few standard VEC fills, which is okay but ehm...

Just to give you a hint, you might want to change these into samples you made yourself or correct them to your liking, because they don't really stand out and make the whole song sound a little cheap, unfortunately!

Other than that, gratz on the top 1.
Remember that i'm only trying to help, not trying to flame.

Unrl responds:

I'm glad you actually left a decent review this time. Not sure about your last review getting deletey though. Thanks for the feedback, I needed it

yep!

I sure had to save it as well.

My only com;plaint is the inconsistency in the percussion, which is a shame!

I would really love some steady beat and some longer climaxes because the melody can pull it off just right. It doesn't get boring.

Nice song though. ; )

Randomizor responds:

Haha thanks xD

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