Yet Again...
It's great, but i'dd like you to step outside your comfort box, and do some more experimental stuff... i mean... Raise the note by a half near the end, wooooot! No, it's so damn typical for this kind of music, and i chállenge you to do something that's not generic, something that will blow everyone's mind.
Since you've proven to me that you can master like a god and can create pretty epic sceneries with pads, melodies etc.
I'dd like to see you do some ambient. (: