I'dd love some criticism on a D&B loop i just made.

If people like it, i'll make it into a song.

well.. there you go.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen /264465

Oh! I mastered it with headphones so i don't know what for crap will come out of your speakers... Just think of it as a well mastered song, or listen to it with headphones... I'll sort it out tomorrow but it's 2:51 here. ; )